Typesetting test by x-cute-x

Here's the test. Im very noob at this so critique and advice is very helpful .

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the typesetting itself doesn't look bad at all! I like the shape of your text-bubbles.
It's just that you used the wrong fonts^^.
Use Wild Words as main font, augie for small text and Yikes for shouts.

nah, i think some of the shape is not good :p
one piece, panel 2 bubble 2 and panel 5 last bubble.
no problem with OD page.

Okay . I redid the the fonts . Here it is .


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looked better with the new font

but still about the shape :p
same as my previous post.

Oh , okay i'll fix the shape .
thanx for the advice

Also another question I want to ask is if you are doing these correction in photoshop?

Yes , im using photoshop but sometimes i also use imageready .

ohh. a new typesetter :O
i wonder if you can replace me

.. you're younger than me! ;__;

Yay! There's someone here who's around my age
Even though ur a year older than me .
Anyways i hve a question . Do i hve to fix the shape for the OD page or only the one piece page?

you can see the other's ts-ing application

dont look at mine my first-try was really noobish xD

You're missing punctuation marks. .-.;; Sorry. I'm a stickler about things like that. XD (in the OP one) Was that in the original script?

Otherwise, nice =) I'm not a TSer, so I'm afraid I can't give much constructive criticism...

But to my eye, you should fix shapes of various bubbles in both the OD and OP pages. (eg. that you like the bicycle thing)

Oh okay
anyways here's the test .

http://tinypic.com/r/2hgtqx1/4

http://tinypic.com/r/2jfjd3d/4

It's ok for most of the bubbles now. Just the centering and the shade of some is a bit off, but that will come with practice.

I'd say you're ready to join us^^.

let's wait for sylx's opinion before I give you staff-status.