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Post by madevil19 on Thu Apr 09, 2009 6:09 pm



i corrected my mistakes in the one piece one and i finished the overdrive one so i posted both of them up,
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Re: typesetting test by madevil19

Post by mathi36 on Fri Apr 10, 2009 6:49 am

they look good.
Just try to use kind of a diamond shape for the text like you did in the 5th panel of the over drive page. That one looks perfect.
concerning the centering, you just need more practice. It's very good for a beginner.
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Post by Sylx on Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:19 pm

looked better Smile


OD page: still about shape.... :/
frame 1 bubble 1: you call them ....
frame 4 bubble 3: you like the bicycle!?

try to improve it.

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