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Post by blennz on Fri May 01, 2009 5:12 am

here is the file its in photoshop like you want Wink

-Deleted- Test passed! =)

Congrats Blennz!


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Post by Sylx on Fri May 01, 2009 12:03 pm

eee?
that's the page used for typesetting test, not cleaning.
but i see no text at all.. confused

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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by justam on Fri May 01, 2009 1:46 pm

hahah yeah, the images you should have done are in this thread:
http://chibisuke.darkbb.com/staff-applications-f4/cleaning-test-t38.htm

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Post by blennz on Sat May 02, 2009 2:43 am

ok i did it click the link
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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Kaze on Sat May 02, 2009 2:49 am

dude. i don't know if it's just me but you forgot to join the pages

this may help

http://www.unblessed.net/guide/main.html
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Post by mathi36 on Sat May 02, 2009 6:55 am

hey, now it looks way better!
I'll post my comments about your clean tomorrow since it's already bedtime for me.
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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Sylx on Sat May 02, 2009 12:19 pm

near perfect!

but you still need to check out the straight line.
there's still some 'gray line' at some point: helm, shoulder, SFX & arm.
btw the arm/elbow need a bit more redraw.
maybe the ear & helm too.. (though most ppl wont notice this details... -_-)

wait for mathi's comment too... Razz

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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by justam on Sat May 02, 2009 3:03 pm

yeah, there's still a faint line where it's possible to see where you did the joining for the two pages. if you had gotten rid of the greys on the white part of shinozaki's shoulder, and on shinozaki's arm (and drew a few more lines from the elbow down) it would have looked correct.

also, kurosuke's helmet (top left hand corner) was done mostly fine, just get rid of the white line you included there. kurosuke's EYEBROWS though got shaved off lol. please redraw that.

attached is your clean with red circles drawn on top so you know which mistakes i'm referring to:
http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif

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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by mathi36 on Sun May 03, 2009 5:34 am

not much to add.
just level it a bit more. the blacks could be a bit blacker in my opinion. there's too much dust in them (but it might just be my laptop).

also upload your .psd file, so I can take a look at how you clean (position of the layers and stuff.)

so, please apply all said changes and we'll take a look at the result again.

btw, well done for your first try with photoshop!
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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Dark-san on Sun May 03, 2009 4:33 pm

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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Xiphias on Sun May 03, 2009 8:36 pm


Further proof that NCIS is amazing Twisted Evil Twisted Evil. Cass is the other main editor for NCIS and THE only editor really when I'm off being MIA.

You probably rotated a page wrong which is why they didn't align correctly when you merged them. If you wanna still join by the time I get back from NY and still need some help I'll teach you.

BTW: Next time include a PSD. Don't touch the background and do everything on a new layer. It'll be easier to see where you messed up especially on redraws.

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Post by Sylx on Sun May 03, 2009 9:24 pm

i cant do that kind of redraws... @_@
if im gonna redraw the feathers, ill do a copy-paste. (speedy redraw)
i cant redraw that manually....

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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Dark-san on Mon May 04, 2009 2:14 am

Yeah, he's the one that private message me on IRC. This video will help us in upping our standards in terms of graphics if blennz would to pick up these skills.
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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Xiphias on Mon May 04, 2009 2:51 am

You can always go to #cleaners on IRCHighway. Some groups put videos together to help each other out. I know editors from Illuminati-manga and NCIS are there along with some other groups. But since it's been a few weeks since I've been on IRC I couldn't tell you any other groups.

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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Dark-san on Mon May 04, 2009 2:57 am

I know quite a few of these channels. I got these links from a channel that he and I regular often. #Cleaners, yeah been there once or twice. I will call blennz to go there, the next time I see him online.
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Post by mathi36 on Mon May 04, 2009 4:34 am

...he definitely owns a graphic tablet
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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by blennz on Mon May 04, 2009 9:04 am

ill try get another done on monday or maybe tuesday
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Post by Dark-san on Mon May 04, 2009 5:45 pm

Cheers Blennz! ^.^;
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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by blennz on Tue May 05, 2009 5:20 am

i did another 1 theres the link in the first post i did go look Wink


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Post by Sylx on Tue May 05, 2009 12:11 pm

it's already good.. i think..
i almost can't tell where the straight line was.

some staff asked the PSD. upload it for them ^^

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Post by justam on Tue May 05, 2009 1:53 pm

i think you did a great job. now just for the cleaners to come in and check your work.

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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Dark-san on Tue May 05, 2009 3:23 pm

blennz wrote:i did another 1 theres the link

Blennz, the links? 0.o;

I can't see them at your post.
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Post by Dark-san on Tue May 05, 2009 4:07 pm

Hah saw it! Waiting for both Kaze's and Ge4ce's inputs.
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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by mathi36 on Tue May 05, 2009 8:59 pm

I already rated his clean. There're still some things left to improve, but that'll come with time. I'd say he qualifies! I gave him some pages of Hanagata to clean, to get some exercise with redraws.
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Re: Cleaning by blennz

Post by Chas on Wed May 06, 2009 6:34 am

Ignoring the dust on the sfx...:

Good job!
If chibisuke is a democratic scanlation group, I'll use my vote and say: You're in. Wink
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