Typesetting/Editing test by litany

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Post by litany on Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:50 pm

I'm not a total beginner, but definitely still have a lot to learn.
Here's my attempt.


please criticize! ^_^

edit:
I've decided to do the cleaning test too, will post later today~ (am very much a beginner at that)
edit 2: here tis-


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Post by mathi36 on Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:10 am

the one piece page looks quite good!

as for the over drive one, take a look at the shape again. E.g the very first bubble. There're about 3 bubbles off-shape. please redo them and upload it again.

But you started off really good! Continue like this!
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Post by litany on Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:30 am

OK, I think I fixed a few of the shape problems, but not sure.
Here's attempt two:
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Post by Sylx on Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:30 am

wow! the redraw is good! but i found 2 dust inside the big sfx.... :p
and the 2nd attempt is good too.

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Post by litany on Thu Jul 02, 2009 1:53 pm

oops, I forgot to completely check the white space (aside from the bubble) for dust (crazy sneaky stuff). should I fix it and re-up?

both of you, thanks for the pointers!
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Post by mathi36 on Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:05 pm

I'm impressed! You sure that you're a beginner? Very Happy
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Re: Typesetting/Editing test by litany

Post by litany on Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:19 am

heeehee, thanks ^o^
I'm a beginner at doing the whole leveling/curving/rotating/dust vacuuming/page splicing processes, but I've done a bit of typesetting before, with editing out the SFXs and text being the typesetter's job (not the cleaner's). Sooo, that's likely helped me with my redrawing, though I still have things to work on~ m(__)m
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