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Post by x-cute-x on Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:30 am

Here's the test. Im very noob at this so critique and advice is very helpful .

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Post by mathi36 on Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:52 pm

the typesetting itself doesn't look bad at all! I like the shape of your text-bubbles.
It's just that you used the wrong fonts^^.
Use Wild Words as main font, augie for small text and Yikes for shouts.
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Post by Sylx on Sat Oct 10, 2009 9:50 am

nah, i think some of the shape is not good :p
one piece, panel 2 bubble 2 and panel 5 last bubble.
no problem with OD page.

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Post by x-cute-x on Sat Oct 10, 2009 10:10 am

Okay . I redid the the fonts . Here it is .


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Post by Sylx on Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:33 pm

looked better with the new font

but still about the shape :p
same as my previous post.

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Post by x-cute-x on Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:13 am

Oh , okay i'll fix the shape .
thanx for the advice Smile
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Post by Dark-san on Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:32 am

Also another question I want to ask is if you are doing these correction in photoshop?
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Post by x-cute-x on Mon Oct 12, 2009 3:06 am

Yes , im using photoshop but sometimes i also use imageready .
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Re: Typesetting test by x-cute-x

Post by SEi on Tue Oct 13, 2009 4:05 am

ohh. a new typesetter :O
i wonder if you can replace me Very Happy

.. you're younger than me! ;__;

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Post by x-cute-x on Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:36 am

Yay! There's someone here who's around my age Very Happy
Even though ur a year older than me .
Anyways i hve a question . Do i hve to fix the shape for the OD page or only the one piece page?
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Post by Sylx on Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:07 am

you can see the other's ts-ing application Smile

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Post by SEi on Wed Oct 14, 2009 10:02 am

dont look at mine Embarassed my first-try was really noobish xD

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Post by Kouri-chan on Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:24 pm

You're missing punctuation marks. .-.;; Sorry. I'm a stickler about things like that. XD (in the OP one) Was that in the original script?

Otherwise, nice =) I'm not a TSer, so I'm afraid I can't give much constructive criticism...

But to my eye, you should fix shapes of various bubbles in both the OD and OP pages. (eg. that you like the bicycle thing)
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Post by x-cute-x on Thu Oct 15, 2009 7:16 am

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Re: Typesetting test by x-cute-x

Post by mathi36 on Sat Oct 17, 2009 6:31 am

It's ok for most of the bubbles now. Just the centering and the shade of some is a bit off, but that will come with practice.

I'd say you're ready to join us^^.

let's wait for sylx's opinion before I give you staff-status.
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Post by Sylx on Sat Oct 17, 2009 11:46 am

:O why me?

it's OK then.... Razz
looked good.

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Re: Typesetting test by x-cute-x

Post by SEi on Tue Nov 10, 2009 5:21 am

she in then? O_O;

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Post by x-cute-x on Tue Nov 10, 2009 9:00 am

yup, im in Smile
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Re: Typesetting test by x-cute-x

Post by mathi36 on Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:56 am

wb^^
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