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TypeSetting Test

Post by Rhystic on Thu Mar 18, 2010 11:41 am

So here's my attempt at the typesetting test pages:
http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif
http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif

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Re: TypeSetting Test

Post by Kouri-chan on Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:13 pm

Just a few pointers:

1) I think we don't put a space between ellipses and the rest of the sentence (unless the script was given to you like that - in that case ignore me!)

First link: I think the first typesetted bubble is hugging the panel edge a bit, but it may just be me.. XD

I would TS Panel 5 as:
I'll
be the
laughingstock etc...

you know? For better shape.

Same with the "I look cute,
so I guess..." part

As for the second test page I don't like the vertical type
(I much prefer
"Hm
...?")
but again, it may be personal XD

Also I don't know how to better do the sfx, but I don't think it looks all that great >< Maybe you could try to reduce the distance in between the letters, if that's possible...

Lastly take my comments with a pinch of salt as I only ever typeset during QC, I'm not a proper editor. That's mathi and Sylx, and blennz and Ge4ce =)
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Re: TypeSetting Test

Post by Sylx on Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:53 am

one piece:
only panel 3, luffy's bubble caught my attention.
the shape is kinda... bad... Razz and move it a bit lower.

the others should be fine...

overdrive"
panel 1, both text in the bubbles is not center enough.
sfx: is it the right font? -_-"

panel 4, bubble 2, part 1 (yamato-kun, you like it?)
shape is kinda strange...

panel 6, bubble 2
move the text to left a bit.. (not center enough)


i guess that's all.

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Re: TypeSetting Test

Post by Rhystic on Sat Mar 20, 2010 1:01 am

cool I'll make the said changes after I get back from my bike ride

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Re: TypeSetting Test

Post by mathi36 on Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:02 am

oh, you biking??? Cool Very Happy!!
What bicycle do you have?
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Re: TypeSetting Test

Post by Rhystic on Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:29 am

K here are the changes; I think I may just want to clean after all Razz typesetting is a bit confusing on some parts ._. mainly the shape thing lol

http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif

http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif

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Ya I do. For road I have a cannondale Synapse 2000 model non carbon with the ultegra set and no granny. (clipless of course Razz) It's not the best you can buy but the price was perfect in my range and I love it :p well minus the shifters I'm buying sram for the front and rear deraileuers as well. Eitherway though it works well enough for me in cat 3.

For Mountain I keep a cannondale F4 with juicy hydraulics. Its a hardtail but its awesome with the climbs in single track Very Happy.

I really wish I could afford carbon though Razz

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